ADrevised

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Sara. She lived in the woods of North Carolina. Her mom was a very nice person. Sara’s mom called a family meeting. Sara’s best friend Ali was there. When all of the family arrived, Mom announced that they were going to Paris! Everyone was jumping up and down, and then Mom said, Sara, you have to marry someone in two weeks." "Ali, you are welcome to come, as long as your mom says its OK. Everyone froze.  I have to marry someone in two weeks?said Sara " Yes, now go pack pack your bags." "Bye", said Ali, "I'm going to ask my mom." Sara went upstairs to pack and when she was done, Ali burst through the door, all packed. "Wow," said Ali, "sorry, I didn't mean to scare you, but my Mom said yes!" ''I'm glad your mom said yes," said Sara's Mom. "Are you ready girls?" "Is father coming?" "No he's going on trip to visit grandma in New York." Once they got in the car they began their trip to Paris. They traveled forever till they got there. They stayed in a nice house. Then they went to meet the queen. As soon as they got there, the queen was waiting for them. They went to a big fancy room and the prince was there. Sara talked with him and then fell in love. She thought, "The only problem is I'm not a princess. I finally found true love and I can't even marry him." The next day Sara woke up really early to see the Prince. She saw an old man who seemed kind of suspicious. He had gold. He was wearing a black suit and sunglasses. When she got to the ice cream shop, the prince was waiting for her . He looked sad. "I had a bunch of gold but someone stole it." Sara was positive she knew who it was. They hung out for a little bit, then Sara left. When she got home she told Ali all about the robbing. One hour later: Ali and Sara went to check out the street, when they saw another person who had gold and was dressed in black. "Let's look a little further," said Sara. They saw the prince weeping. They asked him what was wrong and he had the same response. After that, they went back. The next day Sara, Ali and Mom went out to lunch. While they were walking, they met a girl. She gave Sara a magic wand that could turn her into a princess. The next morning Sara was a princess! She went to go tell the prince. They planed a wedding in one week. That was perfect because it was the day before they left. Two days later,Sara noticed she didn't have her powers. She didn't have her wand. Someone stole it when she was walking. Ali was walking and found a piece of metal that said: please return to 2243 tanner rd. 4th house. The girls went to return it. A very nice man let them in. " Here place it on the table,I have to go to the bathroom." The girls took a seat. "Sara," Ali said.